Easter: The quest for the eggs

The story / prologue was cute and a great introduction to the game.

The menu is pretty bad, while the art and sound in-game are kinda ok.

The gameplay though it's definitely too simple, as the player can just move left and right, and that causes some unfair situations with unavoidable damage.

The story is a nice touch though, and I like how you tried to make the theme fit with easter.

This is not a bad game at all as your first entry, keep learning from these experiences and next time you'll probably make a way more polished game.

Something that hasn't been said yet, which I think would be an improvement, is giving the player a bit of vertical movement. It's a bit boring being stuck way at the top the whole time. Being able to move up and down, even just a little, would also allow the player to save eggs before they collide with money and otherwise salvage impossible situations that the falling patterns create.

The game's simple, but kind of fun. I enjoy all the graphics for the bunny and other objects (though I don't understand why money hurts you). However, the menu is a bit of an eyesore. I do like the story narration, though.

Interesting story and gameplay is promising. I like that you have audio for text.

What I would change/fix:

• Menu buttons should have a hover state. Something should change when mouse is over them.

• The player hitbox (the collision mask) should be a few pixels smaller than the actual sprite. The same for the negative objects like money.

• The eggs and other positive objects should have their hitbox slightly bigger, to counter the smaller hitbox you gave to the player.

• I would try to find a way to avoid having situations where the player can't get the egg because it would collide with money no matter what, which means whatever the player does, he will lose one life.

• When the player dies/fails give him a way to restart the game.

These are quite easy fixes. The last one might be a bit more complicated, but I think that these will make the experience more enjoyable.

Almost forgot. I think the music really fits with the gameplay. Good choice in my opinion.

• i can't use my mouse to navigate through the menu
• Nobody wants to read a lot. Why don't you make a cutscene in which you explain the story? Or just tell the story in bitesized pieces throughout your game :)
• Going back to the main menu from the story section plays the music twice
• Make CLEAR which items hurt the player and which don't

Edit: Everything i mentioned was fixed. Good job and good luck with your entry :)