Post-mortem
Description
Controls
Press Space to continue.
WARNING: Depressing stuff!
IMPORTANT NOTE: I'm okay!
I wanted to try out some text effect techniques and they turned out the be quite okay. I've uploaded project file as part of the submission if anybody wants to take a look at it. This took me like 3h to smash together, including art, music, code and story... pretty much everything!
Feedback
Summary
Take Care is a short, well-written game with effective sound design and engaging dialogue. Players appreciated the emotional impact despite minimal graphics and the limited development time of three hours. Some wished for more interactivity or choices to enhance engagement. Overall, it was praised as a neat and interesting entry that successfully met the jam's constraints.
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Generated by AI based on the feedback Take Care received.
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PatronI always enjoy your games. This one is no different. 💚
SubmittedBicycling 101
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Lv. 19
Likewise, dear Baku! Glad you enjoyed this little interactive story! :D
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Lv. 6
I would have liked some choice or interaction to make it more like dialogue. Mission accomplished for 3 hours though. Only spent 10 or so on mine, I like the challenge of participating and doing what I can with the time I have. Good on ya.
SubmittedEscape the Witch House
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Lv. 19
Thanks for playing! I had some plans, but then I didn't have enough time. Spending one more hour and I would've been able to add more dialogue and maybe one or two "yes/no"-choices, which would've guided the story a bit more unique way.
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Lv. 25
I actually really like this one. Short, well written, good use of sound design. Nice job.
SubmittedDesolation
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Lv. 19
Thank you! On a second thought, I could've used 1 more hour to create at least one "yes/no"-dialog box to give it actual game-feel, but oh well, works as it is!
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Lv. 5
:o. umm, thanks for freaking me out with your awesome music at 1 a.m. But uhh other than that, good luck, love the dialogue and text, really cool!
EDIT: :D
SubmittedFraug, the Mighty Prince
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Lv. 19
I'm glad that you enjoyed! I didn't even consider how scary it would be that late. :D
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Lv. 3
So that's a neat and interesating little game. You say visual novels have more content, but I think there is something else. You see, with words you can draw on the readers emotions to fill in the cracks. Their lives and their experiences bring content to the scene you never knew existed. You don't need fancy graphics or million dollar budgets to make someone feel, and feeling is what drives memory.
Awesome work for 3 hours, and the sound effects were on point!
SubmittedOn Death's Bed
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Lv. 19
Cheers! I could've added few extra lines as now it feels like it ends a bit too fast, but I like how it turned out nevertheless!
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