Deep coma!

Oh wow when others said it was short I didn't know it was this short! Not dying felt pretty weird, you can move around and make the bug crash like 2 different ways or something

Oh well, I don't think I can give you more than others already said!

I will say I was expecting something a bit longer! I can see you focused on the art/visuals over content/mechanical polish - which is ok, but I would always go for a more complete experience over perfecting visuals!

That being said - the visuals are great! I like the background and the character - and the black 'thing' that is following you is a rather cool effect.

I did find it a bit tedious having to click through all the text at the start each time I died (I died a few times since I forgot I could dash). But that's part of the polish things - no dying in spikes, slightly awkward jump powerup thing (Mimpy mentioned this), the dash cooldown seems to be non existent if you're holding a direction and on solid ground.

All in all it felt a bit abrupt after the nice intro and setup, then the level starts, and then... game end?! I think it would have benefitted greatly from more time spent on content.

But still - it's a promising start, and as far as I can see - your first jam - so good job and hope you enjoyed it!

I think this game is beautiful, graphically, it's just a shame it's so short. You've got a really, really solid foundation here to expand upon and I hope you turn this in to a full project

Really seems like way more effort was put on this game visually than mechanics and functionality. The visuals are amazing, but there are severals bugs littered throughout. The most game-breaking (literally) is simply pressing S which creates a GM error screen and forces the game to abort, which caused me to have to reboot the game a few times. Also just falling down into the pit just softlocks the game and forces you to reboot it. I feel like a lot more effort could've been put towards the mechanics and functionality. The game is also incredibly short, which doesn't let what are some pretty solid controls shine practically whatsoever. A+ on art and aesthetics, D- on functionality and stability.

Fantastic art, music fits well. The subtle effect are very well implented. Just left wanting for more content! Can't wait to see what you make :D

Congrats for the visual impression you created at your game, looks really professional. I am not so good at such kind of games, so I had to restart many times :) but finally managed to get to the right side. Unfortunately it ended quickly, I would try some other leves too.

I rated with regards to the submission. but I did play 0.0.3 as well.

I really like how the game looks, it looks really pretty, felt it was a bit strange to use e and space bar for dash/jump, more used to something like x/z, but was not a big deal. The tutorial was really cool but I felt the camera movement was a bit jarring, it always moved when the ghost spawned and disappeared. Good job, would be cool to see this developed further.

I assumed there was WASD Controls but whenever i jumped when using wasd controls the game crashes

Nice style and gameplay, I can see that there was some possible influence from Celeste. Solid start to a cool game, looking forward to the full version.

I thought I'd found a secret when falling into the spikes and not dying, but instead it turned out to just be a softlock, haha.

I really like the black tendrils that creep out of the void as it moves, that's a very interesting effect. And the design of the trees in the background are neat, too, kinda an interesting cross between natural and unnatural. I woulda liked to have had more about the narrative piece in the beginning, but then again I'd like to have more of the game in general!

Some more time could definitely have been spent on adding levels, but also on polishing the existing elements of the game, like making the spike pit kill you, or making the double jump pellets not get used up instantly if you're holding the jump button when you collect them, or making sure the audio doesn't double up when the level restarts. Even a super short experience can still benefit from responsive behaviors.

Nothing that can't be fixed over time though, this has a solid set up and it could definitely become something real nice with more time!

I enjoyed it! Would love to see more!

Very tedious, controls feel really floaty. art looks pretty nice.

nice game, kinda creppy but that's good